What exactly are you trying to say?
I mean, I think I know, but what do you mean?
There they are, the dreaded questions every writer hears at some point in their life.
Translation? Your attempts at communication have failed. Try again.
Recently, I had TJ (my sister-in-law) read my latest poem below and her first comment was, it's good but what do you mean?
Now normally, as stated I might be crushed but with poetry this is sometimes just the response I am looking for.
I then asked her, what she thought it means?
After throwing out a few thoughts, she said she liked it, but it makes you think.
EXACTLY! I hope this poem makes you think. Ponder it, chew on it, and digest it deeply.
And I want to know, what do YOU think it means?! :)
Soul’s Beat
There is a beat within my soul,
It burrows within, much like a mole.
Deeper in, it moves, further down,
Oh, what is inside, what will be found?
It thirsts, it hungers, I speak no more,
So dry, so tepid, so rustic, and sore.
Homesick I cry, for who could be able?
To meet all my needs and render me stable.
This beat forever awakening me,
Never silent, but always, buzzing as a bee.
Swish, swish, there it goes, like waves on a shore.
Leaving only one thing, me starving for more.
It won’t go away, not now, not ever,
It’s constant, you see, like everyday weather.
I look to those waves, the ocean so vast,
It’s here I am at home, for it’s silence at last.
No end in sight, so much to behold,
I peer at the ocean, or do I peer in my soul?
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